Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?: It is time we all relied less on private motor
vehicles to get around, and instead used other forms of transport. Use specific examples and details
to support your answer.
There are a few types of private motors vehicles which have taken invariable part of our day to day lives. We are strongly dependent on them to carry out obligations that involved driving or traveling to other cities. However, I firmly believe that we should rely less on private motor vehicles and use other form of transport. I will provide some supporting explanations in the following essay.
First and foremost, accident risks and car injuries will be reduced among pedestrians. There is no shortage of the opinion that car accident are the very common nowadays. Many reckless young drivers or people who drink and drive are the main prerequisites for incidents. Often, those people don't stop at crossroads or they are not abiding by the speed limit which is extremely dangerous for people on cycle lanes or those walking along sidewalks, therefore we should find and rely on other forms of transportation such as subway or small city trains.
Furthermore, it is popular issue that people with private motor vehicles have difficulties finding parking plots. Pedestrian malls have been made as a solution for parking problem and normally intended for those who are within malls. However, rapid enhancing rate of new drivers and car owners makes it not sufficient solution cause it is inappropriate building malls in straddles to other traffic-free zones solely for parking usage. My city for instance, has bad transport strategy and those citizens who live in a particular community have to submit monthly taxes for parking, and that is not guaranteed even if they have paid though. If we all use other transportation different form our private, we would avoid that problem with the parking
Lastly, the number of causing damage or steals will be declined. In many cities there are areas where is not preferable to park your vehicle due to joyrides. It is regarded that stealing cars or causing a damage to cars is no longer reality. However, there are still some risky place where your car can be stolen, especially if a car is nice looking. For example, 3 years ago I was told by my cousin how some vandals extracted all gas from his tank until the car was parked in front of their apartment. He was very irritated cause he couldn't go at work in the next day. By using subways we definitely won't have such fears.
In a nutshell, there are many avails of using other form of transportation. We will not have parking problems and headaches where to stop, the accident caused by nonchalant drivers to pedestrians will be reduced and finally we won't have worries that some people can steal or vehicle or cause damage to it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'damage'.
Suggestion: damage
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8574610245 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63877812337 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538975501114 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4888306487 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.380952381 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196177925086 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678126629936 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087559165703 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125281735317 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811411856517 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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