It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Lately, we are witnesses of unceasingly edifice's build or establishing restaurants nearby our living community. Personally, I agree of any new projects within my neighborhood except factories which cause harm on air we breathe. I will explain why I feel this way in the following essay.
First and foremost, is that instituting a new restaurant in our living area can potentially boost our economy. This means that some people with a need of job can commence and this endeavor partly will help for unemployment. Moreover, the owners will have to pay government taxes and social and health insurance to their workers, which can economically stimulate the small business. No one can deny that aggregation of numerous small businesses like restaurants in a particular country is the base for her financial stability and further development. For example, newly in my cousin's living area was established a bistro. In the beginning was laborious for the owner to tackle and meet his expenses. However, after he made a web site and good advertise, the business went up and became successful.
Another reason to support my viewpoint is that visitors will have more attraction and choices to eat. It is incumbent to have options when day trippers come to visit your area and they feel hungry. Therefore, establishing a new restaurant in such a busy neighborhood like mine will be great idea to tackle with hungry tourists. Although, many people stop to visit a renown museum nearby my home, a restaurant will not only entice these visitors, but also some indigenous.
In conclusion, I will comprise all mentioned pros from the idea of building a new restaurant in my neighborhood. Among them are key ways for increasing economy and create eating out options for local and visitors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
... his expenses. However, after he made a web site and good advertise, the business went u...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eighborhood. Among them are key ways for increasing economy and create eating out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0614334471 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93124193671 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3829146451 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125652003169 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395899325751 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034553865512 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780901891361 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336793914927 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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