What kinds of movies do you enjoy watching, and why do you enjoy watching them? Use specific
examples to explain your answer.
Each person has his own preferences of movie genres and often visit a movie theater to enjoy premiers or some of his favorites cast on a big screen. I personally like to watch documentary movies at home and romance comedies at a cinema and I will explain why in the following essay.
First of all, when I watch documentary movies at home I feel in more private atmosphere and so I can focus on a particular movie. Consequently, I can better understand the story of famous people or other historical event, for instance. In fact, documentary movies are with cognitive purposes and I believe that home is the best place to watch them, due to the quite and tranquil place. I will never forget, when I watched a documentary movie with a big budget at home. It was about Fredy Mercury's life before he had become a superstar. By watching it I tapped into exclusive news and facts about the singer, that people may are not familiar with. If I had watched that movie at a movie theater, I wouldn't have felt good and would probably missed some details.
However, I prefer watching genres such as horror, science-fiction and especially romance comedies at a movie theater because these movies elicit emotions and I can share with my pals or my significant other. When we are frightened by seeing a scene from a horror movie or we laugh because of a extremely funny scene with the special effects in a movie theater we can always grab our partner for courage or laugh together. We are more excited and feel confident as well. For example, I went to a cinema to watch a great 3D comedy movie with my girlfriend a year ago. It was her first 3D experience and she was exhilarating by watching a plot with special effects. Moreover, the cast was full with world famous actors and their performance was absolutely unique. The soundtrack of the movie turned into a hit everywhere. If I have the opportunity to watch the same movie anew at a movie theater, I definitely would not hesitate to go.
To sum up, there are numerous kinds of movies I like to watch but the most essential genres are documentary and romance comedies. The best place to watch documentary films is home due to the absence of audience that might distract and a person can profoundly concentrate. However, I prefer watching romance comedies at a movie theater with my girlfriend, because the ambience is more realistic and believable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'miss'
Suggestion: miss
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in fact, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66430260047 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73467386893 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486997635934 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6366425159 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.65 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185150850736 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657830023901 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413926275675 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132973499292 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160702705679 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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