What, in your opinion, are most important things a government should do for its people? Support
your answer with examples.
Undoubtedly, there are many ways government would do for it's citizens in order to refine their welfare. The Congress has the power to do changes when politicians vote for acceptance to a particular law. In the following paragraphs I will explain some things that government should do in favor for it's people.
First and foremost, elderly should receive higher pensions based on their internships in a particular working field. It is commonly known that democrats and republicans are in constant disputes. Particular leaders representative some of that parties promise amelioration in pension fund. However, promises are disingenuous or in a best way just negligible. Many old people struggle with paying their expenditures relating to accommodations, comestibles and medicines. For instance, my grandfather is living alone and he receives a little above minimum pension, owing to the fact the he worked many years as a tailor. In the same time he has to pay for imperative medicines and therefore he is at the brim of his possibilities. He is one of many elderly in my country afflicting from the same problem and I think that government must raise their financial support, considering federal taxes we all pay as citizens.
What's more is that the government should make referendums for every decisions that are under question. People's opinion is essential and the prime-minister have to provide the opportunity for citizens to elect whether one law should be ratified. Consequently, that will lead to freedom among citizens and make them play a considerable role in the Constitution's changes in a typical freely democratic society. Not in a robust totalitarian ideology where the independence is not taken in account and people don't have choices to vote and manifest resentments. No one can deny that people would be more happy to choose their own laws and then they won't blame the House of Representatives. Referendums should be made by the government and allocated to senators of each state. They are committed for organization and distribution to votes and calculation. Each state has different number votes to the particular referendum and when all are summed then the majority win, hence government should impose the new law desired by citizens.
In conclusion, there are numerous of ways how government would win it's people's respect. As I mentioned most important are increasing the retirement finances to each person over 65 years old. That will make them tackle readily with difficulties in live. Moreover, we as citizens should choose our communal laws and regulations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22409638554 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0932345319 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559036144578 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9532648886 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2608695652 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243432440988 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646514780634 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588846764368 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152780197823 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609554949584 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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