Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people's lives.
-automobiles
-bicycles
-airplane
Rapid technology development and advancement have expanded all around globe. In transportation field specifically there are considerable changes with the invention of airplane. I stand of the opinion that airplane has drastically changes people's lives in a better way and I will explain why I feel this way in the following essay
First of all, more people than ever believe that traveling by airplane can save their time significantly. We are often enmeshed in our job obligations and daily routine, which in turn want more disposal time. When we are incumbent to undertake a travel to aloof destination, we want to do it as fast as possible. Therefore, choosing an airplane is the best option for any far travel as it saves you form fatigue, headache and losing your valuable time. For example, when I received my working treaty for river cruise job I had to travel to Amsterdam form my city called Varna. However, I was told that I had to be on board 3 days after I received the contract. That means if I had traveled by car, I would not have arrived on time. Instead, it took me only 4 hours to embark on the ship.
What's more is that airplane services can not be consider as a out of reach due to the availability of many airlines which vie to attract people. Even nowadays, we can come across on exclusive flight offers and prices to far destinations. Interestingly, they might show lower prices compare buses or trains to the same destination.
To sum up, I would point that the airplane is essential vehicle and has changed people's lives to a great extent. This is because it saves valuable time and currently is affordable for everyone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 245, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...ime. When we are incumbent to undertake a travel to aloof destination, we want to do it ...
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Line 2, column 551, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...cruise job I had to travel to Amsterdam form my city called Varna. However, I was to...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...e only 4 hours to embark on the ship. Whats more is that airplane services can not ...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...irplane services can not be consider as a out of reach due to the availability of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, therefore, as to, for example, i feel, first of all, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8015974316 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.643041639 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180911467119 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471766099173 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817740900037 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120153125661 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878466946964 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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