“It is more important to have a job you enjoy doing than a job which pays well.” How far do you
agree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Feeling happy at a working place is critically important for everyone, therefore many people look for their perfect job. Although, a salary is not an innocuous factor when we search for a job but I believe that job satisfaction is essential and I will explain why in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, when enjoying our job we tend to lengthen our life expectancy. The feeling of waking up in a morning and go to your working place with mood is unbelievable. There is no shortage of the opinion that every person wants to have that tantalizing pleasant feel which arises from what the job requires. Doing your professional assignments with no stress and pressure can bring about positive emotions. Consequently, by feeling tranquil and calm when carrying out duties at work would ameliorate our health conditions. A friend of mine is a perfect example of that. She was a blue-collar worker doing unsociable hours at a manufacturing industry and her job included action that cause repetitive strain injury. Moreover, the place she was working for is very demanding. After a while, she got a headache and went on sick leave. Albeit attractive, the salary could not have paid for her health, therefore she resigned and sent an application form to a behemoth marketing company. The job there doesn't require physical exertion. If she had continued working in such a adverse working conditions at a factory, she would have become more sick.
Moreover, it is critically important to be happy at a work place due to the good impression that we might make to other co-workers. Accordingly, that would lead to robust partnerships or even friendships out of office. No one can deny that want to have a great time while working, because in this way the day would be more smooth. The salary is not playing any role, because no matter how much you earn that won't buy friendships of your colleagues. I once remember when I was on my seminal river cruise and my gross salary wasn't impressive. However, I had unchangeable co-workers and every day we had so much fun. Until now we are pals and help each other is need it. It is important not only to enjoy doing your tasks at work, but also to love interaction with colleagues and be friendly and outgoing.
In a nutshell, I believe that well payment would not be advantageous over feeling happy at working place. It is because health is more important and when we do something without stress and negative emotions we are inclined to live longer and be more healthy. Also, we can create and retain great friendships at work that can't be substituted for bigger salary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
...hemoth marketing company. The job there doesnt require physical exertion. If she had c...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n. If she had continued working in such a adverse working conditions at a factory...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
...inued working in such a adverse working conditions at a factory, she would have become mor...
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Suggestion: wasn't
...eminal river cruise and my gross salary wasnt impressive. However, I had unchangeable...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d retain great friendships at work that cant be substituted for bigger salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78713968958 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77737583873 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549889135255 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7294457197 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.36 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185001821141 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492489447761 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442037317349 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109098096269 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286275685428 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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