Some people prefer to live in the countryside or in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city.
Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Lately, there is a backward tendency in which numerous people in the age between 40-60 years old prefer to move in rural areas due to equanimity and peaceful life. Arable lands in rural areas give to the people opportunities to cultivate crops and develop agriculture, therefore costs of living are lower compare to a large city. However, I prefer to be in a cosmopolitan city for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First to support my answer, there are multitudinous amenities that make our lifestyle more pleasant and different every time. No one can deny that a big city offers cultural events like operas, movie theaters, music concerts and everyone can find his own preference. By attending those events people became more informed and educated with latest trends, arts, music styles and so on. This in turn, widen connoisseurs' worldview and gives them more advantages over people in the villages. For example, I was born in a small village and raised until 18 years old there. Later, when I enrolled and was accepted at an university in the closest big town I met many indigenous who are very open-minded and extremely intelligent and familiar with latest trends. I felt a little despaired that I couldn't oppose them in the year as a freshmen. However, later I became more confident and knowledgeable because the lifestyle in the big city bolstered me to tackle with difficulties. If I had continued to stay in my village after my 18, I wouldn't have gained my modern imagination of the world.
Moreover, the urban lifestyle is full of opportunities that people can grab freely as they work assiduously. I firmly believe that big cities are exponentially prosperous and enable everyone to make his dream come true and find desirable job only if working hard. The education is more prestigious and there are many educational centers where students can attend and gain practical experience for future career. Consequently, experienced enough they would apply for a job they have been waiting for long time. My cousin is perfect example of that. Since he moved to a big city he studied diligently and unceasingly to graduate PhD. Then he was waiting around 2 months to find his favorite job and now after 10 years working for a conservation program he became junior CEO.
In a nutshell, I believe that city has more to offer you as there are numerous opportunity in every aspect. Although, it is often said that traffic jam and congestion are bothersome and the availability of street crime might be an issue I definitely assert that pros of living in a big city are more than the cons. In a city there are many amenities and interesting places to visit. Also, we are follow our dreams and find our perfect job, where we will feel how we really imagined to be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'offer'?
Suggestion: offer
...y time. No one can deny that a big city offers cultural events like operas, movie thea...
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Line 2, column 334, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...eople became more informed and educated with latest trends, arts, music styles and so on. T...
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Line 2, column 610, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...er, when I enrolled and was accepted at an university in the closest big town I me...
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Line 2, column 734, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... and extremely intelligent and familiar with latest trends. I felt a little despaired that ...
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Line 2, column 787, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...rends. I felt a little despaired that I couldnt oppose them in the year as a freshmen. ...
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Line 2, column 822, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a freshman' or simply 'freshmen'?
Suggestion: a freshman; freshmen
...at I couldnt oppose them in the year as a freshmen. However, later I became more confident...
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Line 2, column 1027, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ed to stay in my village after my 18, I wouldnt have gained my modern imagination of th...
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Line 4, column 396, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...teresting places to visit. Also, we are follow our dreams and find our perfect job, wh...
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Line 4, column 473, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagined being'.
Suggestion: imagined being
...t job, where we will feel how we really imagined to be.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81875 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7511290296 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7799277685 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.565217391 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8695652174 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91304347826 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168559063602 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413233024469 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405198160036 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103353598506 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609875785804 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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