It has recently announced that a new movie theater may be build in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Movie theaters are valuable places not only in terms of public entertainment, but also a great opportunity for talented people to show their qualities and stage abilities. I firmly believe that building up a movie theater in my neighborhood will have only benefits for number of reasons and I will develop some supporting explanations in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, the exploitation of this project can definitely ameliorate our social life within the neighborhood. Many families with kids and couples would like to visit a movie theater during their spare time. Moreover, the auspicious location in vicinity of their houses makes it even easier and enjoyable. If the movie theater was planned for building in other location aloof, it would not have been so convenient for people in my community. For example, last year my co-worker told me that a huge corporation had decided to build up movie theater closer to his home. In fact, he doesn't visit often places like that. However, the company had built up the theater promptly and he curiously decided to go with his girlfriend. Since that time they visit the movie theater in their neighborhood every Friday.
Furthermore, I believe that this will have positive effect on the whole cinema industry as ramp up popularity. It will spurs the young people to value seventh art and by visiting regularly movie theater. Often individuals are bored seeing cafeterias or fast food places in their neighborhood, therefore something different like movie theater will contribute for neighborhood's developing.
In conclusion, things like improving social life, stimulating a cinema industry can be taken in account when this project is planning. I consider, that there are solely benefits from realizing the project related to building up movie theater in my neighborhood. If it is need it, I will definitely aid anyhow.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...theater closer to his home. In fact, he doesnt visit often places like that. However, ...
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Line 2, column 728, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...usly decided to go with his girlfriend. Since that time they visit the movie theater ...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spur'
Suggestion: spur
...industry as ramp up popularity. It will spurs the young people to value seventh art a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19471947195 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88259221266 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5577809273 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175924566285 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593483303662 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436028009322 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115212973091 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166202072144 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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