What are the good things and bad things about traveling? Use specific examples to explain your
answer.
People travel unceasingly for different purposes, from mass tourism and leisure time to migration in seeking for better future. There are even cases in which people in some countries looking for refugee are victims of uncaring government and their lives are at stake due to multitudinous wars. They don't have many choices and are inclined to go everywhere just to have normal and save lives. Of course, there are undoubtedly pros and cons about traveling and I will explain them in the following essay.
To begin with, traveling to unknown destination might be full of adventures and can meet you with many people. That advantage is valuable in terms of exploring hubs and new lands. Despite the cultural shock that might be inevitable, people definitely end up satisfied and happy from the journey. Lately, numerous tour operators flourished in the market, which entice trippers with exclusive offers. No one can deny that there are many ways to organize excursion. Persuasive tour agents try to tempt people to book all-inclusive vacations in which they pay for accommodations, food and almost everything. In fact, the majority of the cruise companies are like that which make them convenient and preferable among elderly. Also, there are many package tours very attractive as well, when a agency arrange even necessity visas and other requirements for entering a particular country. However, independent travelers are common as thy dispose with profuse time to look for places and economy flights on internet by themselves. They don't rely on agencies and undertake excursion alone. I am perfect example of independent traveler and I will never forget when I was traveling alone to Panama 3 years ago. Preliminary I booked a flight in a coach class and made a reservation to a budget hotel in the CBD. I can't deny that I spent a great time in the country as I assimilated their culture and local customs.
However, there are undisputed many cons of traveling afield in other country. Cases in which we are not familiar with laws and official regulations might are surprisingly dangerous to us. A consternation can engross us when we don't speak the language or don't know the rules, because every country is different. I remember once, when I was in Delaware state as a J1 student and I was riding by bike along the cycle lane early in the morning. At the red traffic light in was nobody and I decided to pass through unworried due to the fact that I am with just a bike. That was allowed in my country and I have been doing it many times in my home town. However, after I passed a police man stopped me and imposed me a 45 dollars fine that I had to pay for. It turned out that in USA the rules for cars are equal to those with bicycles. Situations like these can be bothersome for some people when they blunder in. Consequently, they impression of some would be not so good and they would consider the trip as a total defeat. Absolutely there are some without formal permission to enter a certain country called persona non grata.
In conclusion, there are many pros and cons of traveling to other places. The advantage is that we can meet different nationalities and experience interesting moments as our minds became wider. However, aforementioned con is unfamiliar laws and regulations that vary from country to country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2758.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83012259194 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74561274467 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 312.0 212.727598566 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546409807356 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 907.2 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8989471419 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9677419355 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4193548387 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.12903225806 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0567816600428 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0151917429807 0.076458572812 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318235744063 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0383801841582 0.150856017488 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190946170932 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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