Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It's a waste of money for the government to fund space travel or space exploration.
Properly balancing the budget to develop basic infrastructures of the society is a formidable challenge for every government in power. In some cases, the government may be inclined to spend money on space exploration typically being considered superfluous from public opinion. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether funding space travel or space exploration is a waste of money for the government, different people adopt different attitudes toward this question depending on their characters and educational backgrounds. On the one hand, there are people who strongly believe the government can spend such money to conspicuously improve medical, educational, recreational and public facilities and on other hand, others believe spending money to explore space has outstanding merits. As a graduate student studied cosmology, the latter carries further weight since it not only results in further technological and industrial advancements being worthwhile to improve the quality of life on the Earth but also changes our notion regarding the universe and our life by broadening our horizon.
Conquering the space has generally been accompanied by significant industrial and technological advancements which humankind could never accomplish or if they did, it took long time without thinking of stepping on other planets. In fact, humankind thought of finding a way to be able to maintain required food for a long journey deep inside the space leads into discovering how to efficiently pack the food, what are artificial preservative substances and under which condition foods will remain healthier. As a matter of fact, the advancement in food packaging helps human to transport foods over vast distances as economic objectives or to aid their counterparts in remote areas. Moreover, thinking of inventing a particular shuttle which can travel in space for longer distances has resulted in noticeable advancements in airplane industry whereby a variety of advanced airplanes and jets are nowadays available not only for public transportation but also for defending territory. Subsequently, space exploration will profoundly influence on human life providing further industrial and technological advancements.
Space traveling accomplishments has greatly changed the ways people think about their surroundings. There were people who thought humankind is the only intelligent creature in the universe, therefore, made their selves stand out from other creatures and gave their selves the right to think of controlling not only the Earth but also whole universe in future. However, space achievements regarding how gigantic our universe is and the possibility of the existence of aliens which may even be more intelligent than human changed their notion not to be so selfish. To me as student familiar with cosmological concepts, humankind living on the Earth will not play an important role in the fate of universe since they are wholly just as a dot on a blank page. Furthermore, space travelling may uplift barriers and give humankind the opportunities to discover the origin of the life by discovering the origin of the cosmic in its entirety. Personally, I am convincing which universe may be a smart creature as whole and the Earth including all human play the roll of a cell in such smart creature. Hence, more space travelling will help us to obtain a philosophical view regarding the universe we are living in.
To wrap it up, conquering space by humankind not only bring about noticeable developments in industry and technology but also give us a panoramic view of how the universe is evolving. Furthermore, human activities are harming environment in such a way which we may need to discover a planet similar to Earth and provide necessities to live there in near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...ic opinion. Therefore, when it comes to the question whether funding space travel or space explorati...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... only the Earth but also whole universe in future. However, space achievements regarding ...
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Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cessities to live there in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in fact, as a matter of fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3207.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 593.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40809443508 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10587140983 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494097807757 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1022.4 618.680645161 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6192400791 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.789473684 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2105263158 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195593283131 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660255995217 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568333406256 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115526073384 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605032409499 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 86.8835125448 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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