Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people's attitude toward leadership positions brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether leadership comes naturally or one can acquire the qualifications of being an outstanding leader. Although some people assert that intrinsic abilities make a person commander, I, as a vice president of healthcare committee at Georgia State University, believe that people study management skills and become a reliable boss. My opinion is based on recent studies and my professional experience in related positions.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that a manager needs to know specific skills which is not related to his personality. Most MBA programs teach students essential information and softwares to handle the difficult situation. The first important lesson that I learned was that we need different people with different perspectives and characteristics to get good results. For example, an optimistic person speak about procedure and outcome, while a pessimistic person consider risks and failure. Balance of diverse thoughts move a company forward. Therefore, there is no right or wrong intrinsic talent for leadership.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that people with great motivations remove the barrier and accomplish their goals such as being an executive manager.To study MBA, one of the important requirements is to speak English fluently. I think that it was the hardest challenge in my life that I have experienced. But, since I was really interested to continue my education in administration field, I did my best to improve my English presentation. As a matter of fact, none of my aptitude could help me if I did not want to adjust myself to the new situation. Thus, positive incentives encourage people to achieve their dream.
Admittedly, some people have natural talents which assist them to pass this way easier. Definitely, a shy person has to work harder on himself to be eligible for leadership and he must compete with a persuasive person who understand how to negotiate. I agree that it is not fair, but it does not mean that obtaining knowledge is impossible. Nevertheless, I dare to say, if somebody could not become an excellent manager, it is his own fault, and should not blame nature.
Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I highly recommend enthusiastic people not to confine themselves in the boundaries of natural talents and follow their dreams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, i think, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20197044335 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02555304364 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615763546798 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4052030806 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.157894737 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131675060779 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318385521953 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423507949381 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067583118114 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221427081093 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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