Life in every period has its challenges and easiness. Anyway, I agree with the statement that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. I do agree for several reasons of, current time is easier and comfortable.
First, today we are using modern transportation systems and it is very easy to travel and go to far places. For example, we can go from one province to another within minutes or hours. My parents, on the hand, says during my grandparents they were traveling the same distance for days or weeks. At the time of my grandparents they were using donkeys, horses or cows for carrying their loads, but today there different types of cars, taxis, buses, trucks, ships, and airplanes.
The second point is the modern technology for communication. The advent of technology is very later than the time of my grandparents. During their time, they were not even dreaming of such a technology that are available today. I can recall it with an example from my parents. They say that during the time my grandparent, if they were supposed to communicate with a person who was in another country or a far place, they were writing a letter on a piece of paper and then they were assigning this letter to a person who would take it to the desired person within weeks or months. But today we can directly communicate with anyone we want using our cell phone or internet.
Finally, the education system today is much better than time of my grandparents. They had to walk long dances to join classes and gain knowledge, but today they are many online platforms that offer different courses either free or with a low fee. For example, edX.org is an online platform that is supported by top and prestigious universities around the world. I followed academic writing course through this platform and that was really useful.
In conclusion, the mentioned examples prove that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children.
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- TPO 35 :Agree/Disagree: In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- People spend too much time on personal enjoyment - doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do.Do you agree or disagree with the above statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80579710145 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70088319005 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515942028986 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.784209898 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263958899922 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095617606774 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133268430839 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216684177143 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162803586796 0.0645574589148 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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