The world has changed enormously over the past century. We cannot deny the spectacular breakthrough in technology and how we can connect with each other even if they in the other side of our continent. Personally, I strongly agree that life is much easier than used to be in the past for many reasons.
First of all, women in the past cannot work, they use to sit at home, give a birth and watching their kids. Women were totally dependent on their spouse. Now most of females are working and they are successful in their job and in their home as a mom. For instance, my grandmother used to tell me how she was upset because cannot work as a men do. She mentioned that was a lot of burden on my grandfather's shoulders. But now the parents can share the duties which makes the life much easier for both sides.
Secondly, advancement in technology helping a lot in a society and keeping the relation strong. Also, using the technology as a way to assure your family or your beloved one that you are safe. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I went in a vacation with my friends and suddenly on our way back to home, we got flat tire. We suppose to be home in the morning, but we could not get to our house till the night. I called my family and so my friends do. If we never this invention not present in our life, imagine how much stress our parents will be in.
In conclusion, We all know that in the present we live next to each other but not together, I mean every one already preoccupied with a job or family or whatever. Despite that, life stills conditionally easier than before. For all reasons that I mentioned them up to empower my stand point, I agree life easier in the present than few decades ago.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ll, women in the past cannot work, they use to sit at home, give a birth and watchi...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the females') or simply say ''most females''.
Suggestion: most of the females; most females
... totally dependent on their spouse. Now most of females are working and they are successful in ...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...ow she was upset because cannot work as a men do. She mentioned that was a lot of bur...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
... she was upset because cannot work as a men do. She mentioned that was a lot of bur...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
... way back to home, we got flat tire. We suppose to be home in the morning, but we could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3487654321 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46310026227 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0955991756 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1578947368 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166462944354 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515222948763 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532226127123 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994781582955 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175461222235 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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