Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Both internet and transportation play an important role in our life. From my vantage point, I think the government should dedicate more funds to support the transportation rather than improving the internet access. The reasons behind my standpoint are many and I am going to state them in the next paragraph.
To begin with, a lot of people do not have a car. Some students could not afford buying a car because they do not have a job. For example, when I was in college I used to ask my dad to give me a ride. Sometimes my dad immersed in his work and he cannot take me to the school. At the same time there were not enough buses going to school. If I plan to take one, it takes hours for these buses to get to the bus stop and it makes me late.
Secondly, a lot of people have underlying health issues and they cannot drive. It is very dangerous for people with health issues like Parkinsonism and multiple sclerosis to drive, because this may lead to deadly car accidents. For example, my friend has multiple sclerosis and her physician banned her from driving. One day, she insisted on driving alone and she crushed her car and she got serious head injuries.
in conclusion, I am with the crowd that support the opinion of improving the transportation because it helps the older people too. Most of the time the elderly people do not have anybody gives them a ride, or the number of Ubers really few. So providing more transportation facilities would help
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 266.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52255639098 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57253032283 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5381109755 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1875 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181859392236 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568218737247 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665595717721 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116208485822 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780109693967 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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