Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Technology is considered as a key factor, which is changing the world and shaping our life. Some people agree that technology is a blessing to us. On the other hand, the other group argue that it is responsible for removing a country’s own culture and creating a uniform culture around the world. In my view, technology is giving the rise of unique culture for two main reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
The main reason is the discovery of satellite television and Internet. With the help of these new and advanced inventions, people nowadays can watch any reality show, movie and drama of any country and try to adapt these cultures in their home country. For instance, Bangladeshi’s have their own cultures like Pholea Baishakh (Bengali New year), rice cultivation ceremony and we used to celebrate these festivals since ancient time. But, as a consequence of satellite TV & internet, now people of Bangladesh prefers to celebrate different occasions like valentine day, Hallowen party etc. This is minimizing the differences in cultures among the different nations and abolishing the cultural barrier barriers to build a unique world.
Another reason is that the advancement in transportation system, which makes the journey easier and convenient. With help of modern technology, people are getting the information from any parts of the world, which gives the rise of seeing that place. Due to less travel time, tourism has increased significantly for the last few decades. People nowadays are traveling from one parts of the world to another and it has been contributed to amalgamation of cultures of different countries. People are bringing the host country’s culture to their home country and adapting these cultures. For instance, now people are of my country are celebrating the foreign cultures, rather than celebrating our own cultures. This experience taught me that technology is contributes to abolish the cultural differences and building a unique culture around the world.
In conclusion, I agree that the advancement in technology is removing the cultural barriers and creating a uniform culture. This is so because the invention of satellite TV, Internet and advancement in transportation is bringing the world population under an umbrella. So I would like to say that technology is a blessing to us.
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Suggestion:
...abolishing the cultural barrier barriers to build a unique world. Another reason...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28191489362 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0259660491 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494680851064 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6800949137 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.526315789 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123594471723 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461593761676 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413037671034 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901325332539 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352994701592 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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