Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Constant developing technology has changed our world tremendously. I think that modern technology has united all human beings on the planet in terms of ways to work and communicate. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
First of all, these days, barely everyone around the globe has at least basic knowledge in computers and uses them as labor tools. Indeed, all contemporary businesses are based on use of computers programs to run them. Software let people collect and store a tremendous amount of information in a single device, which is crucial for those individuals who work with planty of data. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I am a pharmacist and I have a lot of colleagues worldwide, who are also fiends of mine. Therefore, I am certain that pharmacy employees from all around the world process a myriad of prescriptions every day. To store them in an organised way, every modern pharmacy uses computers programs for that purpose. When a pharmacist or a technician needs information regarding prescriptions of their customers, they always can acces it through their computers and help the patients. In this way, professionals from different parts of our planet have one in common is that all of them use computers in their work routine.
Secondly, with the help of portable technological devices, humans from all around the world share a way of socializing. Social networks such as Facebook and Instagram, which are available to access through cell phohes or laptops, help people worldwide to keep in touch while a long distance away. This advantage is crucial for those individuals who do not have enough time or oppurtunities for personal interaction with their friends, colleagues and relatives. For instance, three years ago I moved to a new country, and I left behind my loved ones. Despite the fact that there is an ocean between us, every single day I can talk to them through the mentioned above networks. Moreover, there, I can see my friends` pictures and videos and, hence, I am capable of remote participating in their lives. In the same way, my contemporaries from all around the planet connect with important for them people. To that end, nowadays, people of different religious, nations, and cultures socialize alike.
To conclude, I think that contemporary technology has facilitated evolution of a single world culture. This is because these days almost every human being on the Earth utilizes computers to perfom their work tasks and uses social networks to interact with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
...ocial networks to interact with others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2130.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0593824228 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89507673454 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536817102138 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0185041975 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133103751951 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431432282484 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417380898817 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101701731048 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314028058127 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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