Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most advertisements makes product seem much better than they really are. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Advertisement is a technique use to companies to attract people to but their products and it depends upon oneself to decide if that is right for him or not. Personally, if I have been asked I believe that it is true that more advertisement makes product look better. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Advertisement is the easiest medium to convince a person to buy a specific product which will lead to company’s financial gains. These days everyone has easy access to mobiles, televisions and other electronic gadgets which are used as first medium to show consumers about a product. Next, we have billboards, advertising at entrance or exit of free ways to influence people as part of their explicit and implicit memory to remember their product. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Few days back, when I was planning to buy a couch as part of thanksgiving sales, I started surfing internet to find a good one within my budget. After that, every time I opened Facebook or accessed any site on internet I started to see ads regarding different couch companies all over ads sections of those sites. As, a result, my mind was influenced by seeing those ads again and again from that specific company that I considered it as the best option and went ahead with that. This clearly depicts that if couch company would not have shown me that many times the ad for the same couch, I might have gone with a different one.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that more advertisements makes product look better. This is because advertisement is the easiest medium to convince a person, and because everyone is surrounded with any type of ad every time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, regarding, so, i feel, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76873617378 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4903103703 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139377394432 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573043559083 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453595548201 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114546599992 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263318492424 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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