Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important problems of the society can be solved during our lifetime.
There are various types of problems in the society nowadays. While some people believe that the most significant puzzles of society can be solved during our lifetime, others consider that it does not find a solution. It is so controvertible for them to determine a specific conclusion. In my view, the most critical difficulties of society can be fixed during our lifetime. They can obtain advanced technologies compared with in the past, teach our children these problems, and produce polished education.
To begin with, people fix the problems of society with innovative technologies. They accommodate internet connections, telephones, and televisions, and so on. Therefore, when they come up with concerns about their society, they are capable of searching the answers. Moreover, it is easy for them to connect with other people who seized the same problems through the internet even if they cannot meet face to face. These progressed technologies can provide the most important problems of society end during our lifetime.
Secondly, lecturing children about our problems gives the problems of social solutions. People learn some intricacies to grasp about their ancestors from the past. For instance, ancient people could not cook food with fire, boiled, or mixed. They also did not how to cultivate crops and gather sheep and cows. After they established each skill to improve their lifestyle, they taught children how they increased the quality of their life. As a result, our life is more processed than in the past, so people have to contribute their children's awareness about the difficulties of civilization.
Finally, the problems of society can be solved with enough education systems. Nowadays, it is so ample for people to access education with several opportunities and backgrounds. For example, young people more apply for scholarships than in the past, so they can go to study different countries even if their families do not spend bountiful money into the schools. These actions occur plentiful merits to enhance common sense needed for each people. Hence, the problems of society are gradually solved by sufficient educations.
To sum up, people can fix the problems of society during our lifetime. I surely believe that they can acquire revolutionary technological devices, interpret our children about the intricacies, and study at the plenty of educational opportunities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2031.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38726790451 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88192593916 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541114058355 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5537127122 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3043478261 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3913043478 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82608695652 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290295848461 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10319351825 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104618503695 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190600128491 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838292482771 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.