Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves.
From a general view, in the recent state of affairs we engaged, it is conspicuously clear that education is a critical and fundamental subject for developing a society. Owning to progressive in the knowledge and technology and elaboration of new methods to improve education and teaching, we encounter with a lot of strategies for learning. One of the most impressive way to learning is how someone learns concept automaton without instructor. We can learn plenty of knowledge, content from intangible material such as nature, daily communication, and others. I definitely agree with this statement that the most significant goal of education is to teach people how to educate themselves. What’s follow I will elaborate my perspective.
From the beginning, Most of us, spended one-fifth of out life as a student and learning at the school and college. Also, some of them want to learn more knowledge and get a upper-level job bu participate in graduate programs such as master and dotorate. While the knowledge in world is likewise a drop of water compared to whole of sea. As far as I know, We can obtain the knowledge as our capacity and effort. It is not possible to learn all of material or knowledge in the university but if we have been learned how we can get literacy by own during official education. Moreover, The most of invention of idea and device have happened at exterior of academic environment. My own example is compeling evidence for my claim. As I remember, one of peers in undergraduate college that graduated bachelor degree and then worked for own company. After four years, I have met him coincidentally and find out he is a sucssessful enterprenur. He practiced and learned a lot of pragmatic techniques and points beyond the assigned course and material during the college.
Another equally noteoworthy point in corroborating my stance is that the humankind faced and engaged with hectiec life style that strapped in time. The course of change in education developed and revoulnized in order a facil and fiscal way for learnig for everyone or everywhere even far reaching location. I am believing that We can learn a lot of subject by ourself without special instruction while the lack of time and money. The expense of academic education sometimes is owerhelming for most of the people and maybe not possible for furtehmost corner of world. This condition are inducive for acquire our demands by unconventional way such as experiment, online workshop, reading books, connection to experienced expert etc.
finally, I am beliving that the learning of concept by some assigned course eliminate our mind to some narrow knowledge and lead to linear thinking. The learnig by ourself based our needs, interest is more productive and efficient for our mind. To another word, these strategies will be useful to broden our horizon and may lead to invaluable practical results. For example, I read and learned a bunch of material and course, books during whole of my acadenmic education but of do not remember even the name of them. However, when I experienced and learened by myself, I think learned by my heart.
To put in nutshell, the learnig by own is more applealing for me because of couple aforementioned reasons. It is more convenient learnig by ourself in term of financial, time-consuming and more efficient compared to conventional way such as official education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...em want to learn more knowledge and get a upper-level job bu participate in gradu...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e programs such as master and dotorate. While the knowledge in world is likewise a dr...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...verywhere even far reaching location. I am believing that We can learn a lot of subject by o...
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...oney. The expense of academic education sometimes is owerhelming for most of the people and ...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ehmost corner of world. This condition are inducive for acquire our demands by unc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, connection to experienced expert etc. finally, I am beliving that the learning...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, incidentally, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2839.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 563.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04262877442 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00554379051 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502664298401 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 920.7 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7500566893 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.392857143 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1071428571 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155978472013 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443992116521 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104105786538 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909140986536 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108025026804 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 86.8835125448 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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