Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Television programs have a tremendous impact on humans' life. They could enhance folk's life in many realms. From my vantage point, I believe that television has a positive impact on the population for the following reasons.
To begin with, Television could enhance individuals' information. For instance, many channels have up to date knowledge that could improve people's information about different subjects like national geography. Some of these subjects have many purposes for people. For instance. when I am bored, I watch this chanal to have fun. In addition, it helps me to be aware of natural disasters and dangerous animals. Last week, I saw a program about the shape of poisoning snake in the forest and how people could protect their life when they face these types of creatures. This information is very crucial for everyone. Now, I could easily recognize the type of snakes from their color and shape of the line in their body.
In addition, Tv programs could improve our health by displaying discussion programs. For example, My mother has high blood pressure and blood sugar because she follows the wrong lifestyle. Recently, she saw a doctor's Phile program. She followed his instructions and advice. This program helps my mother to eat healthy and perform cardiac exercises to improve her health. Thus, she collects a lot of information from people's experiences, who are meeting and asking dr. phile. All that have a positive influence in her life because she changes her lifestyle. Also, Some of the programs give us important information about the weather. This information could save our life. For example, last week, I decided to go to ride a boat with my friend but when I followed the forecast program. It said that the weather will become too rainy. That information saved my life because it was too dangerous to go to the beach in the bad weather.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...on programs have a tremendous impact on humans life. They could enhance folks life in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...many purposes for people. For instance. when I am bored, I watch this chanal to have...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a doctor' or simply 'doctors'?
Suggestion: a doctor; doctors
... the wrong lifestyle. Recently, she saw a doctors Phile program. She followed his instruc...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ecause she changes her lifestyle. Also, Some of the programs give us important information ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00319488818 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65154932016 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4734197124 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0869565217 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6086956522 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0771536827751 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243679502305 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287878327649 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642165011991 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196419434537 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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