Physical activity is the best way to keep a healthy body and a healthy mind. Do you believe this? Do you practice a physical activity? If you do, what and why? If not, why?
sport activities Has a tremendous impact on people life. people could have optimal health and lifestyle when they perform different physical activities. From my vantige point, I wholeheartedly believe that all person should perform exercise for the following reasons.
First of all, being engaged in physical activities game could improve people health by reducing many contemparary disieases For instance, when I was in high school, i was fonding in eating food. I got 40 lb that causes many health problems for me. when my parent taoke me to doctor because i was very tired. He told them That i had high blood lipid and high blood sugar. I asserted to lose my weight by going to the gem and playing diverse types of sports activities. As a result, I lost many baund in few months. Also, the lipid and suger in my blood were reduced. Today, I have athletic body because i am going to the gem consecontly. in addition, my health is very well compared before. Consequently, Sports activities have a positive impact on people's health.
In addition. Being engaged in physical activities could influence on people's personalities. Individuals could change their mood when they perform these activities. For example, before many years, I engaged with soccer team in order to improve my health. By cooprating and coopration with this team, I learned many things like how to deal with different person and how to solve my problem, How to discuss with a foreign person. today, I never hestate to be in discusse with any one thus, i never shy like before Moreover, I have many friend in my team. we spend enjoy time to gather when we have free time. On the other, my friend Ali, He like to stay in home, he do not like to go to the gem. He always nerveous because he
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72402597403 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61049258374 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7132329322 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2857142857 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.070217148475 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217289282823 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327516356427 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540167483896 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110864752281 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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