Physical activity is the best way to keep a healthy body and a healthy mind. Do you believe this? Do you practice a physical activity? If you do, what and why? If not, why?
Sport activities has a tremendous impact on people's health. From my vantage point, I wholeheartedly believe that individuals should perform work out activities for the following reasons.
To begin with, physical activities could improve people's wellness. For instance, today, many people have different types of diseases due to fonding in unhealthy food. These foods have harmful kind lipid-like cholesterol. Cholesterol has a negative impact on people's health by causing many diseases like high blood pressure, which is the most common disorder in these days. When people perform the exercise, dangerous lipid will reduce in their body because the weight will be dropped by playing physical activities. As a result, cholesterol is reduced in the body. On the other word, the ability to expose for many diseases will drop because reducing in deleterious lipid . Consequently, performing sport games could enhance people's health by prevent them from expose to plenty disorders.
In addition. spost activities could have a positive influence on people's personality, especially for young's people. For example, my brother was very shy when he was in high school. Also, he was obese because he liked to eat. he enrolled in sports teams in order to loos his weight. His coach motivated him and trained him very well That help him to have an athletic body. he becomes more confident and never shy. instead of before. He did not like his body's shape because he had overweight. being engaged in physical activities, help him to be more confident by cooperating and collaboration with his friend in the sport's team. it has a positive effect on his life. Therefore, Being engaged in sports teams could have a tremendous impact on an individual,s life
To wrap it up, For all a contemplating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20069204152 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80779660229 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1448760655 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5714285714 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7619047619 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0582148355909 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0188839120257 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322241248289 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394805571436 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318768839172 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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