do agree or disagree with the following concept, children should be helping each other?
hectic life has a tremendous impact on people's lives, especially children. They should be helping others in order to survive in their life. From my vantage point, I believe that helping others has a massive influence in children for the following reasons.
To begin with, children can build their personalities by helping other peers. They will learn many things because they will have many friends. For instance, when I was in elementary school, I was liking to help my classmates. I was very good in math and science. When any student need help in math, I did not hesitate to explain for him and help him in solving his assignment. As a result, I have too many friends. When my birthday came, they surprise me by making a big party and bringing gifts to me. By cooperating and collaborating I had many friends and a good personality. Helping others had a positive influence on my behavior by increasing my confidence and making me happy. Therefore, assisting other classmates has a tremendous impact on a child personality.
Finally, assisting others has a positive effect on children's future. Helping other peers is dispensable merit and all individual like this behavior. For instance, my brother was a very helpful child in his school. When he graduated and got hired, he continued to assist other employees in his work. His colleagues liked him and his behaviors. Also, His director noticed his personality because he was a lovely person. Therefore, he raised his position in the work by hired him as a manager and gave him a high salary. He enhanced his job position by helping other co-workers. He enhanced his lifestyle and future by assisting others. Consequently, helping others has a big effect on a child's fut
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hectic
hectic life has a tremendous impact on peoples...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nce, when I was in elementary school, I was liking to help my classmates. I was very good ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, if, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92832764505 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84786468421 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522184300341 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8653075367 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.7826086957 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7391304348 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197613584863 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656489355144 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732404635699 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165377056254 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772230990094 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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