do you believe that university students should consider taking a different subject such as technology, science, and engineering? do you think that it will have benefits for student od no? and explain why?
Hectic life has a tremendous impact on students studying. some students should study more subjects in order to survive on their life. From my vantage point, I believe that young people should study various subjects for the following reasons.
To begin with, studying different materials helps young individuals to enhance their information. They can widen their knowledge in many realms. For instance, when I was studying as in dental school, I was studying a chemistry in order to understand how humans body work, how the food pass and absorbe in the body. Also, how Ca can join and bind to teeth. how the decay can happen, and how filling mateirals can react with teeth. As a result, the chemistry help me to get profound understand for dentistry. I enhanced my knowledge by studying this subject. Moreover. if I did not study human body chemistry, I could not progress my information and I will face many obstacls in practical life.
Secondly, youngsters can enhance their future by studying various materials. They might need it in their fields. For instance, my brother is a doctor. He was studyign in the Germany. He is specialist in kidney diseases. He told me that he used advanced procedure to dissolve kidney stones by using a laser. He study physicse in order to deep understand dentistry such as how the laser work and how it pass through human's body. He did research and made many experiments in lasier lab. He could improve his work and people's health by studying physics and lasair. Also, his director liked his experience because my brother had a good knowledge about the medical-physics materials. He gave him a high salay raise and hired him as a director in a famous kidney hospital.
To wrap it up, studying different matreials can improve our life and future in a many realms
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9025974026 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67657737662 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1948713253 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.652173913 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3913043478 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95652173913 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.06970397309 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236122048198 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351170779653 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604236811665 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616043438578 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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