Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, media like movies and television are an inseparable part of everyone's life. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that TVs and movies have changed the world dramatically in comparison with the days before their arrival. As far as these kinds of media are concerned some are of the opinion that they are helpful for children, while others believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the latter idea on the ground that although they have had some beneficial and constructive influences, looking on the dark side of these issue on can find detrimental effects of them on people's behavior, especially on children's behavior, among which, the violence, being rude, and juvenile delinquency are of more consequences.
To begin with, having violation as an inherent feature, many of movies and TV shows have profound bad effects on the children's behavior. Since, kids are significantly vulnerable to learn from movies, when they observe rage and harming other people as an ordinary event, it result in irreparable consequences which will affect the society in the future by some psychiatric difficulties. For example, my when my nephew watches these kind of TV products, he reacts immediately by wanting to fight with his peer companies. The importance of this issues got more conpicuous when he had a trouble in school fighting with his friend.
Secondly, being rude is commonplace in today's movies. We can see that they use some extremely impolite words regularly, and needless to say that it has a significantly bad impact on children. For example, when I was in park last week, I saw a kid who told a oath to her dad that surprised him. It was obvious that she even did not know about the meaning of that word, and this shows how medias can be destructive for childern.
Last but not least, teenagers are also prone to these produts and in contrast to the childs can take measures according to these bahaviors. According to the latest statistics, juvenile delinquency has been raised very much and it is manily because of movies. It needs proper actions to remedy this deficiency.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that disadvantages of TVs and movies effects on the youngs substantially outweigh it's benefits. Why should we let our children to be subjected to such harmful medias?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00775193798 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86515887899 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0418065963 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123511058723 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355782187856 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457183093695 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629375359554 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471859191209 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.