Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As technology is evolving, the dependence of people on electronic devices has increased at an unprecedented rate. Especially, when it comes to the topic of whether movies and television have negative effects on the behaviors of young people, it is always debatable. After deeply deliberating over such an issue, I agree with the statement noted in the question due to my personal experiences and observation of life.
First of all, violence happening in movies and television programs can cause children to imitate those behaviors. It may promote children to do such actions because they might unconsciously think that everything in the movie is right. Besides, since most of the parents nowadays are busier, they will not have enough time to company and educate their children that violence should not happen in reality.
Secondly, children' s imagination will have the chance to be limited by those movies and programs. It is widely believed that reading books can help develop children' s imaginations better. For instance, when a child is reading a fiction novel, then the characters in the book can be pictured in any kind of appearance. However, on the contrary, if the novel is adapted to a movie, then kids will only have the impression of how the characters looked like in the movie, which will cause a lack of imagination.
Last but not least, some restricted rated movies and programs can be shown on television or on the internet, which usually has violent or horror scenes. Unfortunately, if children accidentally see those scenes, then they might be shocked or startled, which can cause harmful consequences such as having nightmares. Due to the widespread of the internet and television, this issue cannot easily be solved by their parents since it is so easy to obtain.
All in all, given the reasons above, the disadvantages of children watching movies and television programs outweigh the advantages. That is not to say that other opinions are completely out of merits. Nevertheless, I believe my points of view are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, kind of, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11695906433 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91011333428 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573099415205 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5089273064 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137223409205 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432065627696 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491019860547 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767248730084 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551469242388 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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