Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree with this statement that movies and TVs have more negative effects than positive effects on the ways to young people behave.As you can see, most of the modern kids are more mature than before, sometimes they know even know more things than adult sometimes. it is a good signal, and the movies and TVs are the ones who makes this, they makes us know more about the world and human culture. they teach us many things that we did not know before and we can learn and fun at the same time. There are more entertainment for modern children to play. For example, there are many good movies and shows today, like animations and comics. the young people can learn morals from it, and some children will make a job goal that they want to be an artist who draws comics, or some one who can make animations. For instance, there are many movies for history, human sociaty and economy. Young child can learn history without getting bored and sleepy. In other ways, it will be much more easy to understand for the young people too.I will take myself as another example, I was atract by anime when I was eight, now I am going to high school, an art high school, where I can draw anything I like. When I was upset, I can draw something to free out my emotions so I will not wasting time in control my motions and worries about hurting other people.Due to what we had discussed above, I think that movies and TVs are not a negative thing for young people behave, it is actually a positive thing. Just as their parents should know, they need to control their time on it, nothing could be good when it is to much to someone.
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...on it, nothing could be good when it is to much to someone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, so, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35430463576 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.108866024 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533112582781 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0138065377 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181950231626 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652268306649 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103557074628 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181950231626 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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