Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies are worth watching only when they teach something about real life
The issue of whether the only movie that teaches us something about real life are worthwhile to see aroused much controversy among people of different ages and different perspectives. Definitely, some people, if were asked would agree with the statement that the informative movie is worth watching, as this movie teach us lessons about life, however, others have a negative attitude toward this point of view. I postulate, Even though the movie can assist people to learn more about real-life are really worthwhile, people usually opt to watch comedy and science-fiction movies. In the following paragraph, I will shed light on the arguments to support my view.
The first vital point to be mentioned is that in this hectic life people choose watching TV as a leisure activity to relieve their stress. Therefore, most people are inclined to watch a funny movie to set their mind free. Although these kinds of the movie might not be informative, people drive a benefit by laughing and forgetting about their hustle and bustle of daily life. For instance, the comedy series like ‘how I met your mother’ was watched by millions of people around the world, since this movie provides them a funny moment to relax after a long day of work and study. As you see in modern word with all that stress these kinds of movie more advantage people than the movie to train them valuable lessons about real life.
In approaching this issue, apart from the reason given above, another reason that deserves some words is that the most popular movie around the world is science- fiction movies which are not about the real-life but completely imaginary. They hit the box office every time release. The main reason for this popularity is because they get people an opportunity to lead a quite different and unbelievable life for two or more hour which gives people a sense of free from any boundaries. For example, In my country most the producers have a tendency to invest in a sci-fi movie, in order to attract more audiences. As a result, if people tend only to watch the movie to receive practical lessons about their life, these type of movie were not all that popular.
By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion people not only watch a movie to get a lesson about real life but most of them prefer to watch comedy movie to relax themselves and Sci-fi movies to go beyond any boundaries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to watch'.
Suggestion: to watch
... that in this hectic life people choose watching TV as a leisure activity to relieve the...
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Line 2, column 591, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lax after a long day of work and study. As you see in modern word with all that st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79047619048 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49955098008 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519047619048 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3945003066 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.133333333 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329773901417 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114437330709 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750534355748 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218322020277 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669111000401 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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