Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young.
From the beginning of human civilization, we are in an unstoppable journey towards the future. We have gain advancements in many aspects, quality of life, health, educations and what not, throughout this journey. Howbeit, some people coincide that our parents enjoyed life better than the current generation. I believe otherwise. My opinion is based on three arguments.
First and foremost, with the enhancement in healthcare and related technologies, current generation enjoy the benefit of healthy life. Physical happiness is one of the major pillars in "the house of happiness". Owing to developed health facilities, average life expectancy of young generation has increased significantly. Moreover, medical diagnosis has helped doctors to identify diseases in there early stages and has helped to save many lives. Furthermore, with the knowledge of psychology, now people can successfully face stressful situations. Now they know how to improve mental health. All these factors have helped young generation to enjoy their than their ancestors.
Second, with the development of education has given rise to many opportunities to younger generation. Our parent did not had the opportunity to use computers and internet to help their education. Because of that they had harder times in keep in touch with the latest knowledge. They had to rely on traditional school to get education and traditional education methods were definitely not fun. However with advancement of education psychology, current education systems has changed in a way that, to make both learning and teaching a pleasant experience to both student and teacher. With the help of video animations, interactive tools, young generation learn more confident that ever before. This will lead them to better future than our parents currently possess.
Last but not least, current generation has many sources of entertainment. Social medias, various music platforms to enjoy wide variety of music flavors, plethora of software tools to help painters to create more creative art works. In contrast, our parents only hand limited options such as Television, Radio etc. These media gave only artificial experience, but current generation enjoys more real experience owing to the technologies like, augmented reality, 3D movies and many more.
In conclusion, with the development of technology, young generation enjoy the benefits of it. We have more healthier lives, we have wide variety of opportunities in education and we have better entertainment medias. All things considered, it seems reasonable to assume that we enjoy our lives than any of our previous generations and definitely our parents are happy about these as they have done many commitments to give us all these sources of happiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... younger generation. Our parent did not had the opportunity to use computers and in...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...cation methods were definitely not fun. However with advancement of education psycholog...
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Line 10, column 103, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'healthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: healthier
...ation enjoy the benefits of it. We have more healthier lives, we have wide variety of opportun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2357.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53286384977 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00252727715 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5774423859 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6538461538 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242801083148 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653151790001 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614172592765 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135919979978 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527742856668 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.