Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Generally speaking, as a human being, we have clearly noticed that nowadays are less difficult than our grandparents was experiencing in the past due to human being advancement. I, indeed, personally believe that our lifestyle in the present is much easier than in the past. I will delve into two conspicuous reasons to elaborate my standpoint.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief is technology development has been showing a rapid pace changes in our lifestyle. These paramount changes with many varieties have made our life much easier and more comfortable. Undoubtedly, taking the privilege of new technologies development could make travelling unnecessary for an example. A noteworthy example of these technological advancements is Video calls. Imagine you are living fifteen years ago, and you wanted to travel to see your beloved ones who live far away from your town. Needless to say, the absence of such a technology would make it more difficult to do. Indeed, on the other hands, the ample of Video call apps would lead to make our lifestyle much comfortable than it was. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I remembered when I was a kid, we travelled to see our aunt who live in a different city. Nowadays, we just call her via video call apps and chat with her.
Furthermore, the technological development has evolved and facilitated our lifestyle in majority of our routines. One of our substantiated routines is shopping. My grandfather’s experience is compelling example of this. one time he told me that they usually go to shops faraway from home just to buy essintial food even if it was in impoverishment condition . In addition, he went once to a pharmacy to buy an essential medicine which seems it was not available for couple of months, thus he had to wait. Indeed, on the other hand, online shopping has a significant effect on our lifestyles. I showed him how easy I ordered his medicine, and he expressed her impressed feelings without saying a word.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that our lifestyle nowadays is much comfortable and easier than in the past. This because the development that human being has achieved such as technologies which has affected our lifestyle significantly in many different ways such as online shopping and presence of new technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93281653747 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97616093913 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516795865633 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 387.0 20.1344086022 1922% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1909.0 100.406767564 1901% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 387.0 20.6045352989 1878% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 88.0 5.45110844103 1614% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186168579494 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186168579494 0.076458572812 243% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11265965821 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391335174975 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 195.3 11.7677419355 1660% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -321.33 58.1214874552 -553% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 154.2 10.1575268817 1518% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.3 8.01818996416 328% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 10.002688172 640% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 156.8 10.0537634409 1560% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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