Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
No one can deny the fact that along with the advancement in technology people’s life has changed drastically for better reason obviously. In the given scenario it is perceived that we now are having a lot more comfortable than the people in our past. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly, digitalization has shown it’s impact in our life in a more positive way. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, we can see huge difference in education system back then and now. To be more precise, people in the past had to travel to miles distance for school nevertheless there were not qualified teachers and well equipped schools. To exemplify, my grandpa used to walk to his school for 2 hour for his whole school life which is something I could not ever imagined of. However, children today can learn in whatever ways they would like to without having to travel to distant place. Drawing from my own experience, during the lockdown period I used to attend online class although physical class was not possible. This clearly shows if a student is enthusiastic for their student, distance and learning institute would not be a barrier in this present era which once used to be the obstruction for many.
Secondly, internet has made possible to have communication with our near and dear ones. Now, with the use of electronic devices we can interact with our family member although we are miles apart. On contrary, our grandparents could known about wellness of dear ones through letter which used to took months to deliver to destined place. Not only this, they had to travel by foot to reach post office. For instance, my granny told me her story of walking for 1 hour to send letter to my grandpa since he was in another village for work and letter took about months to reach to his working place. Needless to say, this is not the case now, my father is in abroad and my parents communicate through videocall whenever they wish to and most importantly they do not feel missed as well. Therefore, indeed life has been convenient to great extent than it used to be in past.
All things considered, with all the advances that technology has brought unquestionably we have got a blessed life which our grandparents could not experienced. Hence, we should be grateful for everything we have received in our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: IT_IS[10]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...t undoubtedly, digitalization has shown it’s impact in our life in a more positive w...
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Line 2, column 240, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ied teachers and well equipped schools. To exemplify, my grandpa used to walk to h...
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Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...randpa used to walk to his school for 2 hour for his whole school life which is some...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'could' requires base form of the verb: 'imagine'
Suggestion: imagine
...ife which is something I could not ever imagined of. However, children today can learn i...
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Line 2, column 711, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to institute'
Suggestion: to institute
...or their student, distance and learning institute would not be a barrier in this present ...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have known' or 'know'?
Suggestion: have known; know
...rt. On contrary, our grandparents could known about wellness of dear ones through let...
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Line 3, column 860, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ient to great extent than it used to be in past. All things considered, with all the a...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'experience'
Suggestion: experience
...d life which our grandparents could not experienced. Hence, we should be grateful for every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75421686747 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66744920052 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561445783133 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8042891081 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.842105263 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178131014899 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552883586663 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323384474184 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103527478412 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508937393 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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