Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific details and examples to support your answer
"comfortable" life parallel health life". A saying by my mother to me when I was much younger. however accurately, society deems it fit that every individual irrespective of the age stratification lives a comfortable life for once and might not come by a more better life than what we have today. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the saying that my life which is the modern life is much more easier and comfortable than that of my grandparents. this essay will present a veritable argument to this subject.
According to those who propose that life of the old "accient life" is better than our modern life have their claim buttressed with the fact that they believe that the accient life was the morally fit and healthy life style since to them fresh food and unrully decipline seems to be a major factor to this motion
however, it is no longer a debate that modern life is more comfortable and easier than that of our grandparents because of the introduction of technology such as, WhatsApp,ECG machine in the hospital, Automobile for transportation etc.although there are several negative factors which accompany the use of this technology but this factors can't thwart the fact that the advantages of this technology supercised the disadvantage. my personal experience is a compelling example to this claim. I was opportuned to travel to my village where I meet my nibblings who were still staying with my grandparents and didn't have the luxury of using a smart phone because my grandma sees the technology as a devilish innovation. this made them standout negativity in the society due to the fact that they were not informed in life's current activities. this example demonstrate how technology have made my life better than that of my grandparents.
Furthermore some irrelevant practice or culture of the accient day such as mandatory worship or local diety are no more in parctice in some part of the village. Thanks to the exposure to the western culture for most of us now have the liberty to choose a religion and a worship center of our own.For instance, my cousins in the village still practice this old activities of sacrificing animals to a sculpture believeing it to protect and keep them alive. Had I not left the village I would still be trapped in this old believe.
In conclusion, after weighing the both claims presented in this essay I vehimently agree with the point that my life is better than that of my grandparents owning to the introduction of technology and western culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94158878505 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02909274761 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478971962617 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.967416792 48.9658058833 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.071428571 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215828769035 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944776215688 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833590180015 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129071690142 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792053427298 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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