Do you agree or disagree with the following statement No books should ever be banned Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words Do not use memorized examples

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

No books should ever be banned.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

Books are the powerhouse of knowledge. Both sides have strong position for whether any books should be banned or not. If I were forced to choose, I would firmly take the position that some books need to be banned. For that, I will give three reasons and explain for taking this position.

First of all, the books which explicitly describe strong sexsual contents should be censored. Because, the stong content like phedoplia which is considered as disease should be bannded. It will be strongly disturbing for youngs and they will go through in trauma for reading this types of books. Other cases, like somone may inspire for this content and it will be distareous for that person as well as for the society. That's why books like this should not get published.

Secondly, the books about weapons should not get permission for publication. For instance, this arm's books can be used for dangerous stuff. For my personal experience, my younger brother get a simple books about making simple boobs from petrol. After finishing the book, he gather necessary materials for making this. However, before finishing, it exploded and right arm of my brothers was severly injured. This events give me the impression that not everybook is useful for all and some may destructive for others.

Finally, extemist's books are also harmful for society. For example, religious's books which spread violance and fights can breakdown a community very quickly. Books like this can inspire religious peoples for fights and country like afganistan facing this issue severly. Extreme fighters captured much of the areas of afganistan and doing crime aganist humanity. They don't allow womens for education, ban music, and doing court proccedings in the open field and no justice is served. This is true for any kind of idiologies which are extreme. So, this books should not be seen light.

In conclusion, I firmly hold my position that all book should not be published. Books which are not according with standards should be banned for betterment of society.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06528189911 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46873216484 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563798219585 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6184955773 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.125 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0416666667 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29166666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157047980233 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614380249827 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045462917719 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115229521556 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325689755773 0.0645574589148 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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