Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One can learn a lot about a person from the type of
friends the person has.
Needless to say, social reality has made human relationships more complex than in earlier times. As a result, people may spend considerable time to know more about others, such as their personalities and life experiences. Some people concern that people are independent individual, thus it is unrealistic to get any useful information about others from the kinds of friend they have. Others may consider that people who share the common ground can easily get along with each other, which means that we can know a lot about others through what kind of people their friends are. From my perspective, I am in favor of the later statement.
Admittedly, the vast majority of people may believe that people cannot be identified through the type of their friends since they are independent. They concern that it is abrupt to judge a person from his friend’s behavior or habits. For example, if a person with great integrity has a friend who is a criminal, it is unfair to regard him as a criminal since he has never committed a crime. They believe that we should evaluate an unfamiliar person by his own life story and personalities rather than through his friend’s. Therefore, all of the aforementioned reasons can illustrate why some people think people can not be learn about through his friends.
However, I oppose their statement since they neglect the fact that people can be strongly affected by their friends, especially when they have spent numerous time with each other. For instance, at the beginning of this year, a lurid scandal swiftly became the hot-discussed topics among people. A Korean celebrity named Zheng JunYing was accused of rape and drug deal and he admitted his crime soon. Several day later, one of his best friend, the one who was regarded as the most upright and merciful actor, was also indicted for the similar guilt. At first, everyone was reluctant to believe in the news since that men seemed so kind that it seemed unlikely for him to do such disgusting thing. However, it turned out to be true and he acknowledged that he was influenced by his friend. Therefore, no matter what a person supposed to be, his friend will exert a strong impact on his own behavior and habits, more or less.
What’s more, there is every reason to believe that people with the similar interests find it easier to become friends, To quote a well-known proverb, “ birds of a feather flock together.” One of the major elements that sustain excellent human relations lies in extensive communication between people. In most cases, having a similar interest provides a good topic for discussion. As the two are familiar with it, an in-depth talk is more than likely. During the course of exchanging ideas, much can be gained and mutual understanding can be strengthened as well. In a sense, it paves the way for establishing stable friendship. Therefore, with the purpose of making friends, many people prefer to attend various groups and clubs. It is in such places that the closest friend might be made. Take myself as an example, I encountered my best friend when we participated in an activity organized by the literature in my university. Due to the common passion for classical literature, we had much to share and finally we became intimate friends.
To sum, although some people may concern that people cannot be known about from the kinds of their friends, I definitely believe that we can gain much information about a person through his friend’s interests, hobbies and temperament since it is these factors that engender their friendship and people can strongly affect each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, in most cases, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3035.0 1977.66487455 153% => OK
No of words: 609.0 407.700716846 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98357963875 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96768813016 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76088733215 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 212.727598566 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509031198686 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 932.4 618.680645161 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8741950216 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.407407407 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85185185185 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220640969559 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601470224468 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480750521113 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140101932509 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509992728396 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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