Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
Undoubtedly, money plays a vital role in our lives and no one can deny its importance in people’ success. From my point of view, money is the symbol of success and people can do their favorite activities only if they have enough money. Earning a lot of money has countless advantage for people and in the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First of all, we can purchase our necessary things with money. Frankly, most people live in small rented apartments in my country but if they have a higher income, they will buy big houses and get rid of small apartments. Rich people can drive expensive cars and travel to other countries on weekends. They can register their children in the best schools and pay for extra courses and classes for them. Furthermore, they will take their children to most advanced hospitals, if they become sick.
In the second place, people behave toward rich persons respectfully because they have high status in the society. They can hire other people to clean their houses, educate their children and so forth. Rich people can provide their children with the opportunity to study in high-ranked universities. In addition, in some countries, rich parents help their sons and daughters marry. For example, they buy an apartment for them or hold wedding ceremony.
Last but not least, rich people are successful because they usually work hard and they are more talented. They are powerful and help other people in various ways. For instance, they help the poor to escape from the poverty and I think it is a noble thing to do.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that rich people are successful in their personal lives based on the reasons which I outlined above.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, first of all, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8903654485 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55364838534 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3683330501 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5882352941 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144446471136 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055305205078 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567315281666 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900548578291 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773303019844 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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