Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In many people's opinion, the celebrity's opinion is much more useful to the youngster than elders. However, it is super wrong and superficial that the opinions of celebrities are all very important to young people and old ones.
Many people believe celebrities' opinions might more influence on youngsters since most young people will be blindfolded to believe everything from their idol. Just like in Korea, the idols are their superstar and cannot be blamed in those teenagers' minds. Sometimes those idols' opinions might be helpful than their parents. If those children are confused about the path of their life, the idols' opinion will be more important than their teacher's advice. Also, some children might not easy to listen to their parents, but the animated actor's words might easily make them listen. As the above example, those people, believe the opinions of celebrities will useful to youngsters, consider their theory will as strong as a stone.
Nonetheless, those people's belief is wrong that most elders will easily listen to celebrities' opinions either since they don't have such high intelligence and searching technical that they will listen to the expert's advice. Such as they might listen to the authoritative doctor's opinion to eat more medicine to make their health better no matter how the doctor doesn't know the elder's health that the medicine might harm their body. Besides, the elder will easily to listen to the politicians' advice to make their decision such as vote a president that the elder might not know the president's policy and the president's promise. To vote in blinded just because those elders believe those celebrities' opinions.
As the aforementioned suggest claims that all people from young to old might easily to listen to other's opinions in blinded that the most important thing is to stand their statement stronger and analyze those opinion and make the right decision by themselves expect by others. Also, celebrities such as famous entertainers, experts, and politicians should remember their statements, and advice will easily change other's minds and distort the media that they must think more than normal people before they issue a statement.
Through those arguments, not only youngsters will listen to celebrities' opinions, but also elders do. Therefore, the most important thing is not to blindfolded to believe anything that people should analyze and make the decision on their own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'idols'' or 'idol's'?
Suggestion: idols'; idol's
...fused about the path of their life, the idols opinion will be more important than the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f celebrities will useful to youngsters, consider their theory will as strong as ...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... celebrities opinions either since they dont have such high intelligence and searchi...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'experts'' or 'expert's'?
Suggestion: experts'; expert's
... technical that they will listen to the experts advice. Such as they might listen to t...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
... they might listen to the authoritative doctors opinion to eat more medicine to make th...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... health better no matter how the doctor doesnt know the elders health that the medicin...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elders'' or 'elder's'?
Suggestion: elders'; elder's
...o matter how the doctor doesnt know the elders health that the medicine might harm the...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'politicians'' or 'politician's'?
Suggestion: politicians'; politician's
... the elder will easily to listen to the politicians advice to make their decision such as v...
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Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'presidents'' or 'president's'?
Suggestion: presidents'; president's
...ident that the elder might not know the presidents policy and the presidents promise. To v...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this opinion' or 'those opinions'?
Suggestion: this opinion; those opinions
...nd their statement stronger and analyze those opinion and make the right decision by themselv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22762148338 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53074190716 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437340153453 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7855542753 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209299309863 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924628335041 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717695310222 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158933523362 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691483949441 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.