Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
When it comes to be happier and more satisfied in their life, many people believe it is easier to obtain in the past. However it is wrong and superficial, it is more easily reach joyful and satisfied by modern resources.
It is true that there are less competition and pressure in the past than in secular society. In fifty years ago, most people who went to America for study are easier to achieve and success. When they become success easily they might more enjoy their life and satisfied themselves. Differently, in modern society, many people are eager to become success in big city but it is harder than before, most people need to learn when they are in young age. Most of them need to learn myriads of languages also lots of subjects and burned the midnight oil every day to achieve. It is impossible to let them happy and satisfied their life.
Although the introductory true example is beyond doubts, the potential disadvantage out weight than obvious advantage. Just like becoming success is not on a par with satisfied their life, they might be more greedy to gain more money and more power because it is easy to successful, some people might exploit loopholes even commit a crime and lead to fail. Also it is more difficult to educate in the past, many people who doesn't earn educate might plague with poor environment and poles a part from someone who is easily success.
Most importantly, the internet is develops rapidly in nowadays that everyone can easily buy everything they want on website. When they are browsing on the internet and see something looks perfect, they just need to click on the screen and send message to seller, they just stay at home and waiting for the product deliver by others. So they can easily satisfy by buying everything they are eager to gain. Also many people can be famous by internet such like be a youtuber or blogger to happy with their life.
Compare to the past, it is easier to satisfied and happy with their lives by buy everything they want and become famous easily. It is strongly advice that believing this belief to fulfill and enjoy with the life in this changing rapidly world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...eve it is easier to obtain in the past. However it is wrong and superficial, it is more...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...odern society, many people are eager to become success in big city but it is harder th...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s even commit a crime and lead to fail. Also it is more difficult to educate in the ...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...to educate in the past, many people who doesnt earn educate might plague with poor env...
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Line 4, column 52, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...antly, the internet is develops rapidly in nowadays that everyone can easily buy everything...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ying everything they are eager to gain. Also many people can be famous by internet s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70026525199 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35351619479 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480106100796 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3068736812 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.235294118 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229802183986 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816921946538 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584493107509 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140501435175 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456102178011 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.