Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In many people's opinion, watching movies and televisions might have lots of negative effects such as a waste of time and make people learn bad habits. However, this statement is unfounded and superficial that allow youngsters to watch movies or televisions might have more benefits than negative effects.
Many parents believe allowing their children to watch television might waste their time and make them only a little time to prepare for their major and do their homework. If youngsters are always watching movies can skip their duty on a student, their grade will be worse than before. However, students all need a little time to take a break and release their pressure from school. Sometimes, a little relaxation can make youngsters have better energy and attention to do their school works. Also, parents can limit their children to watch televisions only for one hour or make them finish their works first that relax. Those negative effects can be settled smoothly by some enacton.
The skepticism still argued that some movies might teach youngsters some bad habits such as smoking or fighting that parents should forbid their children to watch too many movies and televisions. Although there might some violent plot in some movies or televisions, there are some restrictions to the youngster who is under fifteen years old or who hasn't been an adult who cannot watch the movie. Also, there are myriads of a movie in intelligence and much global news on the television that youngsters can learn many things which can't be learned by teachers in school.
The most important things that watching movies and televisions are youngsters can cultivate the relationship in their family. Sometimes youngsters might easily argue with their parents, but parents always want their children to be better that might be more strict. If they aren't cultivating their relationship, parents and children might become farther. Every weekend spent a little time with their family to see a movie or watch television can make their family closer and better. There are no other things that outweigh the family. So movies and televisions have much more benefits than negative effects.
As the aforementioned suggestions, watching television or movies have a lot of Mof benefits that people don't consider. Most people should notice that it is plausible to allow youngsters to watch movies outweighs restrict them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17223650386 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56837170161 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462724935733 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6894188809 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.894736842 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151833766326 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688751520275 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066865849525 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119224843729 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735221745695 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.