Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to celebrate major events, it’s better to organize a big party with lots of people than to have a small party where only close friends and relatives are invited.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have an inevitable tendency to participate in parties, ceremonies and so forth, where vast majorities of people gathered and enjoy communicating with each other. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether it is better to organize a big party and invite many people for the ceremony or a small party with just close friends and family members. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that big parties with a plethora of people are more enjoyable and beneficial for individuals than the small one. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, participate in ceremonies and parties provide an opportunity for people to throw their stress away and spend a happy time because there are too many cool people, spending time with them make you happy and lively. Generally phrased, there are several aspects regarding participate in a big or a small party. But the thing which is utmost important is the fact that people want to be happy and thrill. As a palpable example, in a big party, a great opportunity will be provided for individuals to become familiar with different people with diverse attitudes and passions. So, not only can they become happy and lively but also can socialize and improve their social skills. To elucidate more on this issue, in a big party where myriads of people are in there, people will learn how to interact and how to behave with different people.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance in this subject is that the big ceremony will help us to transmit our cultural traditions to other societies. If we take a minute to ponder over it, parties and ceremonies are the symbols of culture and they can show what the culture or a society is. For instance, in my country, the government celebrate New Year Eve annually and invite crowds of people from the different culture to the party. Therefore, not only can people from different countries become familiar with our culture but also can introduce traditions and costumes to the world. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that a big party not only is beneficial for people but also for the whole country as well.
However, every coin has two sides. Organize a big party might create staggering costs because it needs different foods, equipment, facilities, a good place and so forth. The startling fact which flabbergasted me is that a plethora of people are inclined toward the opinion that a big party is not expensive and it's beneficial. That being so, hold a small party is more appropriate for people because it allows individuals to save more money for the future. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2523.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85192307692 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67166191103 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488461538462 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.0 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4332449376 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7619047619 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279640714279 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803846031129 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683181314164 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143535369329 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940154466449 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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