Do you agree or disagree? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future.
Life difficulties definitely come in many different forms and shapes. They can be painful and sweet as well. No one in the world can escape some kind of difficulties, which will accompany us in a whole life. Success is one the most important life goals for everyone, but every mature human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one, is whether difficult experiences can be useful in the future or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that people in all around the world should confront difficulties in order to be self-sufficient and rely on themselves in future.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, there are vast majorities of obstacle and trials and tribulations, which people can take advantages. Scientifically speaking, some difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In fact, in the course of our life different situation will happen that definitely are unpredictable. Indeed, we should learn how to cope with various conditions because everyone is going to face numerous difficulties and obstacles. Delving further into the issue reveals that crowds of people are looking for success in their life. Hardly ever can people reach to success without difficulties. In fact, many people are not familiar with the definition of success because they did not experience failure and do not know the value of success. Actually, difficulties provide fertile ground for people to achieve their goals and desires. Confront trials and tribulations in our lives not only will increase our self-confident but also make us feel strong in future. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that myriads of people, who experienced hard situations in their life, not only know the value of success but also know how to reach success. Indeed, they were diligent people that overcame fears and got sound decision when they stuck in difficulties and afterward they benefits from their response to hard situations.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that vast majorities of people are not mature enough and do not know the value of difficulties. Broadly speaking, difficulties will help people how to gain knowledge and experiences and learn how to make a sound decision. Although some difficulties may be painful, they have valuable influence in people's life in future. Indeed, complex situation provide an opportunity for people to be learned people and acquire different skills. To put it in other word, life without trials and tribulations is like a dream, which people are not able to take advantages of their life and convert to an experienced person. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, difficulties may ruin all the dreams of people who are looking for better life. In fact, it can halt people from achieving to their goals because many people are not able to face difficulties and do not know how to handle them. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, there are different kinds of difficulties in life, which people face day in day out. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that if people cope with trials and tribulations in their life, they will be able to reach success and learn how to handle problems. In addition, difficulties will teach people how to be mature enough and learn different skills in their life. I highly suggest that people should learn how to handle difficulties in order to be self-sufficient person. If people do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness a situation, which no one are able to appreciate the success in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Life difficulties definitely come in many different forms and shapes. They can be painful a...
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Line 1, column 725, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... self-sufficient and rely on themselves in future. One compelling reason, lending cred...
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Line 3, column 1034, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...-confident but also make us feel strong in future. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible...
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Line 3, column 1433, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...tuck in difficulties and afterward they benefits from their response to hard situations....
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...have valuable influence in peoples life in future. Indeed, complex situation provide an o...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...an opportunity for people to be learned people and acquire different skills. To put it...
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Line 7, column 644, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...able to appreciate the success in life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230125523013 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.164574616457 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0822873082287 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0669456066946 0.046263068375 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047419804742 0.0685040099705 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112970711297 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0264993026499 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93851230492 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0404463040446 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.00139470013947 0.00188951952338 74% => OK
Determiners: 0.0585774058577 0.0887237588012 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0278940027894 0.0209618222197 133% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0292887029289 0.0139019557991 211% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3969.0 2387.08602151 166% => OK
No of words: 651.0 408.028673835 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09677419355 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05120793913 4.48200974243 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.362519201229 0.338922669872 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26574500768 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176651305684 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133640552995 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93851230492 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.524397521467 82% => OK
Word variations: 52.7081353164 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6684587814 150% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8070379258 48.84282405 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.032258065 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.483870967742 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 47.574500768 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.325 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180156209573 0.300154397459 60% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0899847615049 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0687286650143 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450285078761 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141961795152 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070767831891 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563843195918 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.568897784252 0.336927656856 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0639917031705 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144346752858 0.210909579961 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495580951359 0.0618886996521 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 19.0 8.42114695341 226% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.4623655914 406% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 29.0 13.6433691756 213% => OK
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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