People recognize a difference between children and adults. What makes a person an adult?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that children and adults are the pillars of every given society. As a matter of fact, there are significant changes that distinguished children from adults like graduating from university, find a decent job, take a responsibility, getting married, living independently and so forth. In fact, these differences prove the maturity of human beings living every corner of the world. In the following paragraphs, some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, there are vast majorities of factors that show a child is mature enough or not. Indeed, mental maturity or even graduating from university play an important role in people's life. Generally phrased, before attend university crowds of people are not mature enough to make a right decision, which is a sign of being adults. For example, children are not able enough to identify what is true and what is wrong and it enhances the likelihood of doing something wrong. But, after going to university children will learn how to behave and how to interact with others. To elucidate more on this issue, graduating from university will provide an opportunity for children to enhance their mental maturity and become a self-sufficient person in their personal life. Based on a study conducted in my country, a plethora of children who did not attend university has not been able to think wisely and meticulously and make a sound decision.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that myriads of children could not even take the responsibility of their acts owing to the fact that they are not experienced enough. To put it in another word, most of the children accustomed to relying on their parents and can't handle problems when confronting trials and tribulations. In fact, when they carry out something wrong, they never feel responsible for their faults. As a matter of fact, getting married could provide fertile ground for children to take the responsibility of their works. Going into the depth, getting married play a dominant role in people's lives because it will force people to confront difficulties and handle them successfully. Arguably, getting married could distinguish whether a person is an adult or a child.
Thirdly, living independently is of the utmost important issue, which shows whether a person is mature or not. As far as I am concerned, many people during their childhood live with their parents and they can't even take breathe without the presence of their parents. Living autonomously is a clear sign that proves a child grow maturely and are not dependent on others.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that there are many hallmarks that show a person is a child or an adult. In fact, getting married, living independently, graduation and so forth, are of utmost critical importance issue, which makes difference between adults and children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third, thirdly, for example, in fact, as a matter of fact, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2461.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13778705637 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85457914339 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48643006263 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8246907827 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.863636364 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7727272727 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272503397203 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758559950549 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573639410924 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155045596923 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846854406357 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.