In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the cause of this phenomenon.
In today's hectic world in which life has trials and tribulations all people around the globe looking for better life. People have different points of view about lifestyle regarding the trends of modern world. In fact, a vast majority of people try hard to enjoy their life. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether nowadays people's lives have been longer or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that the trends and advancement of technology in the world, provide fertile ground for people to live longer. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that today the lifestyle has changed during long run. Scientifically speaking, in the past, people confronted different difficulties, in which they were not able to handle them. One of the most paramount such difficulties were different diseases and paucity of medicines. In fact, people were not informed and knowledgeable in order to overcome illnesses and crowds of people day in day out passed out. However, with the revolutionary of medicine and enhancement of scientists' knowledge, not only could doctors cure patients but also provided them with the best health care services. Delving further into the issue reveals that ancient people suffered from lack of treatments and hardly ever can they survive against such peril diseases. Indeed, with development of technology in high range of ways especially in medical branches, not only do people get familiar with various ills but also learn how to overcome such dangerous diseases. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by a recent social research in our country; show that people who provided with the best facilities, health care services and high-equipped hospitals had more chance for longevity rather than others who never accessed to the cure services.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that nowadays people are more likely to lead a healthy lifestyle. Broadly speaking, in the past, people did not avoid such unhealthy food including sugar, sauce and so forth, which prevented them from a healthy lifestyle. To put it in other word, people were more exposure to the obesity and heart disease with usefulness and fatty meals. In fact, not until people eat vegetable and nourishing meals can they lead a healthy life. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, ancient people were provided with much more healthy food. Additionally, they live longer because they took advantages of fresh air without any pollution. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, different kinds of problems play a key role when it comes to people longevity. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that nowadays people are provide with the best health services and advancement of technology make it facilitate to be cured by doctors. In addition, nourishing foods and meals play a pivotal role in people's life. Indeed, meals and foods, which people eat, should be healthy in order to live for a long time.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'regarding', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239864864865 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.148648648649 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116554054054 0.0866891130778 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0726351351351 0.046263068375 157% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320945945946 0.0685040099705 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0371621621622 0.0351676179071 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80582350553 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287162162162 0.0309702414327 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00337837837838 0.00188951952338 179% => OK
Determiners: 0.0675675675676 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0101351351351 0.0209618222197 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185810810811 0.0139019557991 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3301.0 2387.08602151 138% => OK
No of words: 533.0 408.028673835 131% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19324577861 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392120075047 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28330206379 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204502814259 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142589118199 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80582350553 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544090056285 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 67.8578774294 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4953787766 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.961538462 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.423076923077 0.644075263715 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.830206379 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.58666666667 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281601946599 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0808195091809 0.103427244359 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0555764179731 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433097345245 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.104128484377 0.151897553556 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10215862582 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473732881031 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.409467901782 0.336927656856 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339840992464 0.067059652881 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207609695195 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611934651986 0.0618886996521 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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