The way we are living currently has led to global warming, increased pollutions levels across different cities, river being dried up, etc. For these reasons, I feel that the future generations of various organisms are being put to threat. If we continue to live this way, soon it will become more worse and then there is no chance to claim our earth as it once was.
First, the extensive use of fossil fuels has to led to global warming. Since, many years we have been emitting carbon in the environment at an unsustainable rate. For years, the rain forests were absorbing these carbon emissions, but now we also have been deforesting our forests. This leads to carbon being absorbed by our oceans; therefore, the global water temperatures have been increased. Due to this many oceanic species: corals, blue whales, seals, etc. are on the verge of extinction, and if we continue to do this there is surely going to be a negative impact on the future generation of these species.
Second, we have pumping out water at an unsustainable rate from ground resources since many years. This has led to the downfall of underwater reserves significantly. Also, due to global warming it has been raining a lot less than what is once used to. This problem is made worse by inefficient planning of rainwater conservation. For instance, the north-western part of India is predicted to be facing water crisis from 2030 due to this problem.
Third, along with cutting down the rain forest, we have been replacing it with agricultural farms to fulfill the demands of rising human populations. Our farms have constantly been overharvested which can lead to nutrient deficiency in that soil. Once it becomes nutrient deficient, it is nothing more than a barren land. This problem is already faced by several countries like India, and it is only going to become worse with time if we don't take any preventive measures.
In conclusion, due to the mermaid of problems mentioned in the passage, and as it continues to rise, I feel that our future generation is going to face a major crisis because of the negative consequences of these activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...e to live this way, soon it will become more worse and then there is no chance to claim ou...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sil fuels has to led to global warming. Since, many years we have been emitting carbo...
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Line 7, column 439, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y going to become worse with time if we dont take any preventive measures. In con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88980716253 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74607703235 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4776799711 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4210526316 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168101281412 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492836335666 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503045466071 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097758855224 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440722368269 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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