Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Most people agree that the modern technology affects our lives in many different aspects. In my opinion, the access to the internet has many benefits for both individuals and communities as a whole. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in the following essay.
Firstly, online investigative reporting helps to expose the political corruptions and to keep politicians honest. In the past, there were only a few news outlets willing to write about the politics, which they had secret connections to the powerful politicians. As a result, they were not willing to make investigations regarding the political issues and they were hesitant in these matters. however, today, there are many online websites making reports about political issues no matter who they are. For instance, an online magazine recently published a story about the mayor of our hometown had taken bribe from the property developer. this was shocking and well-researched with the details, where the mayor had no choice but to resign. Although the evidence was not difficult to locate, only this independent website was willing to address this issue properly. this example clearly demonstrates how the internet helps to strengthen the democracy in the modern world.
Secondly, people are more motivated than before to become politically active because they can freely exchange their opinions online. In countries all over the globe, people use social networking services to share their ideas and thoughts. While in the past people might have thought that they were alone with their beliefs, today they realize that others share their ideas. my own experience demonstrate this concept. when I was at the university, I learned the municipal was going to demolish the park near the university to make a room for a massive parking lot. It was really disappointing because that park was the only place made us the happy moments which we spent our free time. At first, I thought that, as an individual, I could not stop this process from happening. however, I later joined a face book group dedicated to opposing the plan. when the members of the group realizes that how people were happy by going to that park we were get together and enthusiastically protest in front of the city hall until our voices were heard. I am convinced that finding each other on that site gave us the courage to actively protect our park.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet certainly has many positive effects on our lives. this is because online journalism helps nourish the democracy and because social networking services encourage people to get involved in local politics
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10983981693 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68564303241 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567505720824 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0975728945 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0869565217 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30434782609 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.067182864356 0.236089414692 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212277440361 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286296561159 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500801653196 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223759579065 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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