Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Overall the widespread use of the internet has mostly positive effect on lifes in nowadays world
We could not imagine the world today without the internet. Personally, I see more positive aspects of using the web nowadays. Firstly, you get connected with every point in this world.Secondly ,you don’t have working hours or do not need working place when you have a PC connected to the internet around you.
To begin with, in the past people around the world used to send letters to each other. As we know one message like that could travel between countries for nearly two weeks. With the development of the internet everything has changed. We send not only messages but photos, videos, and other different media only with one click and they are delivered for less than a second . The web has made the world a smaller place and gathered us no matter where we live. Thanks to it we have new opportunities. We find friends more easily.What is more, the internet helps us to find a perfect match with other half. Something that was not possible before. I need to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience . For example, I have so many friends who have lived abroad and I know their daily routines and I feel like they are around me.
Likewise , the internet helps us to be more independent from our working place. We have started to live and work like ‘’digital nomads’’. We can work from wherever we and when we want .This is how we become distinctive than other workers and we increase our working capacity because we become more ambitious to achieve this lifestyle which is only possible with availability of the internet. When I was a student I had been working for an internet platform and I did not have any strict schedule for working , so I combined university and work easily because I was free to choose when I wanted to work
To conclude , the internet is the pillar of the 21th century. Without it we could not communicate so easy with our relatives who live around the world and our jobs would not be so flexible in order for us to have the dream life we have always wanted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66301369863 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70625307346 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523287671233 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.1340363811 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5555555556 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132096675494 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509311657589 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522456484512 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108273164425 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736754020773 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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