Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.
The Internet provides services, which have a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world. In my opinion, access to the internet is enormously beneficial for both individuals and communities.
At first, online research helps academic students to find information for their research. Scientific magazines start to publish researches on their website that make some companies like google establish a search engine only for scientific research, as a result, students now have a lot of resources for information, so they save their time and will be able to use that time in other research steps.
In addition to that, The internet contributes to the development of online shopping. People nowadays can order anything such as clothes, footwear, gadgets, appliances, and much more, so for people who do not have much time to go shopping because of their work, online shopping is the best choice for them, also online shopping offers a various website that can choose the product according to your requirements and compare the prices to choose the best price.
In conclusion, I believe the Internet has a positive effect on our lives because it makes our lives easier than before. It develops many fields that establish many technologies to utilize.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20297029703 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78220023951 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623762376238 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.690402383 48.9658058833 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.375 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12035302023 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708361145956 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109715878551 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941777481139 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979389281199 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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