Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
technology played a fundamental role in developing various fields, so we have gained advancements in many aspects, quality of life, health, educations, and whatnot. In my opinion, life today is easier than before.
At first, with the enhancement in healthcare and related technologies, the current generation enjoys the benefit of a healthy life, also nowadays we have devices that help in medical diagnosis, which make doctors able to identify diseases in their early stages, so we can save many lives from death.
In addition to that, the development of education allows many people to learn, also it provides some interesting ways that make education better such as video animations, interactive tools, and using the internet that help students to understand more information, but our parents did not have the opportunity to use computers and the internet to help in their education, so they had to rely on the traditional school to get an education.
Last but not least, people have a lot of entertainment like
Social media, apps with software tools to help painters creating more creative artworks, and phones using it in browsing or shopping. In contrast, our parents only hand limited options such as Television, Radio.
In the end, with the development of technology, the young generation enjoys the benefits of it. we have healthier lives, better entertainment media, and better education. I believe that young people have a better life than their parents enjoyed when they were young.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in addition, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22821576763 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86240295302 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609958506224 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.241520004 48.9658058833 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301259065383 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141542489597 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144287959084 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141527796741 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125262457216 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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