Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the Internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important that students use the best available resources when they do research. In my opinion, it is far better to use printed materials than online sources. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, printed materials such as books and articles are more reliable than websites because anyone in the world can edit the information on the websites, so even the articles on popular websites might contain incorrect information, also some of the articles are not qualified academics. I had an experience that I was assigned a research paper in physic class. I used some information from the internet, which later turned out to be incorrect, and the professor spotted it, which causing me to fail the assignment and receive a low grade in the class at the end of the semester. If I compared the information with a book or a scholarly article, I would have got a better grade in the class.
Furthermore, books support the article, which you can find it on the internet because book cover topics in much detail, also the textbooks are more useful to students. Students who use them when doing projects can also look at the detailed indexes, which include all topics that help them to focus on a specific topic. For example, I was assigned an essay last semester in a Biology class I consulted contained a long description of the ozone layer and the problems which can make because of their hole. In contrast, most of the online articles that I consulted contained little more than unreal facts. I based my research on the book rather than these articles, so I was able to write a very insightful paper.
At last, I believe that printed information is more useful than online resources. This is because books and printed journals are less likely to be biased or contain errors and because books provide a superior level of detail
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, for example, i feel, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73939393939 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6241024527 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539393939394 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8321047974 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300444996397 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102997112883 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694109249332 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190679736387 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460556963188 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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