Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
There is no doubt that internet was the biggest and the most powerful innovation in this world. Personally, I believe that internet plays a significant role in everyone's life. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore in this following essay.
To begin with, I would say that internet has a big impact in our daily routine. It is something that we use the most during the day for too many different reasons. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. It is helping me to stay connected with my family and friends, as I live so far away from them at this time. For example, when I moved in United States four years ago, I used to use the internet almost every day to talk to my mother and my friends, because I missed them so much and I was very homesick. So, in my smartphone I downloaded an applicatin called Viber, where we were able to speak and also see each other using the camera. We also could share pictures and other memories that helped me to feel better. If I did not have the oportunity to use the internet,I would feel so depressed and stresful. So, being online most of the time and having the chance to talk to my loved ones, helped me to release the stress and be happy. This makes me feel that internet helps people to be releaxed and healthy, both mentaly and phisycally.
Furthermore, nowadays we are required to use the internet, as there are a lot of informations we need in our workplace or school. At this time I am a student, and I have to use the internet for every subject and I like it, because it is so accurate and saves me money and time. For instance, The other day I needed to finish my homework and give them to the teacher for evaluation. I used my computer to do them and submit via email. It saved me money because I did not need to buy papers and pencils, also it spared me time. There was no need for me to go to the collage to give the assigments to my teacher. I just emailed them, and everything was done quickly and accurately. Besides that, sometimes I need to use a translator when I do not understand a word, and there is no way for me to have a dictionary with me all the time, so I use my phone where I have installed the google translator. It works perfectly, I only need to say the word and it will be translated immediatly. In other words, the internet has made the peoples live easy and happy.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that is critically important that we use the internet effectivly. This is because If we know how to use it , we can get all of the good things that can be available online.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... we use the most during the day for too many different reasons. My personal experience is a co...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...This is because If we know how to use it , we can get all of the good things that ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...e If we know how to use it , we can get all of the good things that can be available onlin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 87.0 43.0788530466 202% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29243353783 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55709399435 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472392638037 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9254848354 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.96 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.56 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157201020382 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521299958411 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434154237736 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106459545808 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00929827498884 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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