four days work
Both the reading and the passage are talking about the risks and benefits that the companies may have if they offer four days work per week. The passage claims that if a company would offer people to work only four days per week it would be more benefitial for the company. However, the lecture does not agree with this statement made in the passage. The professor says that four days work would affect the company in many ways, line economically.
To begin with, the reading part says that short week work would increase the company benefits because the empliyees woul be more rested, and as a result they can work more, and make less mistakes. On the other hand, the listening part says that four days work will force the company to speand more, a lot more. The lecturer says that the company will need to hire new people and it is very costly, because they need to pay for the training and for medical benefits. He said that, medical benefits costs the same, either a person works four or five days.
Furthermore, the author of the passage supports the idea that four days work will decrease the rate of unemployment. He said that the company will need to hire more people. Yet, the professor of the lecture does not agree with the idea given in the passage. He said that, four days work will not decrease the the uneployment. He claimes that the employers would ask the people to work overtime in order to achieve their goals. Also, he said the company would have higher expectations, because they will think the employees are rested and they can do more work. So, they will expect them to do same amount of work that they can do in five days, now they will be required to finish it in four days.
Finally, the passage says that the less day work will be better, because the people can spend more time with their families. This specific argument is challenged by the lecture. It says that, it can be high risk to reduce the quality of life, and also decrease the people's job availability. Moreover, the professor said that the employees thet work four days will be the first to loose their jobs in the economy downturn.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun mistakes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s a result they can work more, and make less mistakes. On the other hand, the listen...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... that, four days work will not decrease the the uneployment. He claimes that the employ...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... that, four days work will not decrease the the uneployment. He claimes that the employ...
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Line 4, column 381, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...het work four days will be the first to loose their jobs in the economy downturn.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, talking about, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 5.04856512141 495% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 384.0 270.72406181 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5390625 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18051806159 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4296875 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0956745368 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40583046345 0.272083759551 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170196763163 0.0996497079465 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152000424921 0.0662205650399 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3054573177 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643405107185 0.0443174109184 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.2367328918 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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